Women Should Not be allowed In The Army

Women should not be allowed in the army 

Am I for or Against Against 

 Organizing Ideas: 

For

• Some women are strong and independent 
• Some women want to be in the army as if it was their dream
• Women know how to treat people
• They can help by being a medic 

Against

• They can get pressured too much and have a mental breakdown 
• They don't know how to fight unless they are trained
• Can get mad easily 

Organizing the Ideas

• They can help with the medical task but they can't help with the physical tasks
• Some women can go to the front lines if they are trained properly and if they can handle it
• Some women prefer being in the back, Therefore they can help with the medical tasks.
• They can help but if they are too stressed, some of them would have a mental break down. 

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In our history, some women who are brave enough would go and join the army to help the medics. Some would join because they neede more people in the medic. Some would join for the money and getting paid and some would join because they got forced too. In our history, Women are known as great medics and they seem to have a lot of knowledge about taking care of wounds

In World War 1 and World War 2, Women would have been forced to join the army because of the lack of the medics they have and they need more to take care of the men that have wounds. After their job is done, some would stay because they liked how they were getting treated and they also like getting paid. Some would leave because they would get too pressured and they think that it was too hard to work in an environment where they would see men everywhere with wounds. Some of them would get disgusted by the blood if they are not used to seeing blood. 

Overall, Women are great medics and even today, As of today, they still use women to help and treat the wounds of soldiers that have been hit. Why women you may ask? They choose women because women have great sensing and they are known for taking good care of you and they are not that reckless as boys. Even in video games, you would see women in the campsite taking care of wounded soldiers. 

Am I for or against in my topic? I am against because women can achieve greater things than men, not by physical but mentally. They have higher skill than us boys when it comes to thinking. Women can also take care of people better than men. They are nicer and their patience is way longer than a man's patience.