Thursday 22 September 2016
writing
looked down i got scared it was high i was afraid but i have to go to school and i don't wanna get wet other people behind me was scared. But we carried on to walk on the bridge. I felt the rope was gonna break. The bridge was going down slowly we panic we carried on fast we all made it. We didn’t get soak or anything but the problem is the way home that was our only way to walk we didn’t know how to walk home. After we waited for 1 hour but we saw someone had a boat he letted us in the problem is he asked for money but we didn’t have enough money on us. He got angry and he said that we wasted his time he was suppose to go fishing but we wasted it and it's getting dark.He started making a threat and we were getting scared but a friend helped us he paid the guy and we got home. The morning the sun was shining and it was hot.
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I think your vocab is really good
ReplyDeleteBut the down side is you put to much full stops
I liked that you put some describing words.Next time you should start with something simple and makes sense.
ReplyDeleteI like how u used expression and u miss spelt some words remember to do capital letters and full stops.
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